Learning to fly by Jetsi

I made the unfinised version before, but i finished it and i think it sounds great

Your song just goes with a continuous beat. It gets a little boring.

Good job if this is just a start the the rest will be amazing

GRAMMER HIPSTER:Wow Yellowtail you used 2 of the word “the” your soo gay.
SHUT UP! >=(

But besides the beat, it’s not bad. When the drums come in make it more explicit. It needs more variety.

Hey thanks, the ending i have to agree i dont dont like, but this is my first finished song that i posted

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