Lets try that again

I was just trying to make the bass kinda the main melody well appearently it didnt work out.

the bass sounds a bit out of tune, don’tja think?

It sounds awful. The bass is the worst of it.
1.5/5

Waa! You changed it completely! Well, time to rate this instead. 4/5 this time

same,
new rating; 3.5/5.