FINALLY, first finished V3 piece and overall first finished piece since June 2014 (also longest piece to date). Hopefully I didn’t end it too horridly, so if there is anything that definitely needs attention feel free to let me know.
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Amazing!
Really well done
weird ending phrases. not sure if i like anything measure 80 onward
Completely understand where you are coming from. After hearing it a few times I felt I should’ve done at least one more “revisit” to the piano section earlier and then on, tie it up somewhere after that. However I liked the overall sound of the ending, even though it doesn’t really fit in with the rest of the piece, so I was eh I don’t want to redo it all and just left it in. It is kind of bugging me though, might have to do some sort of a rewrite in the future.
If it’s alright with you, I’d like to try to work on it as well (maybe something similar to the hop rearrangement)
Sure, go ahead.
Sounds really nice and atmospheric. Good job 
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