Not sure if I made this song better or worse.
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My brother plays this game
Anyways this is insane XD
Well, you should show him this.
He doesn’t like notessimo >.>
Notessimo verion better.
Cough
only slightly worse.
GOOD JOB!
Show him anyway.
I was thinking of getting this game cuz’ I think it said it had phoenix wright as a character and I thought that was pretty cool, I haven’t bought it yet, but maybe… maybe…
nicely done, Ace, my friend \m/
With some keen eye, now I see a nice critique is in hand here.
Note: I still love this song.
Sheets 0-1: Started off great, but the rock organs should’ve been louder. They were there to blend with the melody, not hide in the back. Especially since the guitar wasn’t the melody. Also the backup synth was as well too soft.
Sheets 2-3: Compared the original, you can only tell the melody was from it. The bassline was not synth-y enough and I think instrument choice was not the greatest here. Organs should’ve been louder, especially the one that comes in Sheet 3. The percussion was very nice, but there were some highlights in it that you missed. The end of Sheet 3 didn’t sound anything like the original - short and a measure long. And also, the drumbeat started coming back at the end. Where’d that go?
Sheets 4-5: The glockenspiel was too loud. There was a lot more going on at the beginning of sheet 4 than you put in. Like you have 8th, space 8th. The song was 8th, 8th, 8th for the first few seconds. Measures 7-8 were amazing. However, the next part with the synth should’ve been an octave higher. Sheet 5 definitely should’ve had more synth-y parts; the guitar doesn’t fit the title well.
Sheets 6-8: Amazing. The only bad part was the melody was wayy to quiet, and the synths too. Don’t know what was up with the bass drum in 8. YOU MISSED THE HIGH NOTES AT THE END OF 8. THEY TRANSITIONED INTO 9. I LOVED THOSE D:
Sheet 9: This would’ve worked great, had that melody existed. In the original, I hear nothing like that. In fact, all I hear is the main synth that you clouded out. Also, the ending drums were not great at all. However, this part was still amazing, but not accurate.
Overall critique rating:
4.231/5
Minor mistakes - almost unnoticeable
Somewhat (not horribly) bad instrument choice.
Accuracy needs to be better at sheet 9 and ends of some sheets.
Notes:
Analyze songs a little further; I can see you’re really good at it, but there are certain things you are missing. Plus, you added parts in that weren’t in the original you posted. Your basslines are lacking in accuracy. I think you really need to start paying more attention to the drums and the bassline (metal guitars are NOT the bass in this!), as your melodies and harmonies are fine.
On a minor, minor, minor, note, the cover is too slow.
That’s alot of words :L