My second song! As before, Constructive criticism, comments, etc. all welcome! I apologize for the multiple posts of my last song. It wasn’t supposed to happen.
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Second song? This is SO much better than my first posts. 5/5
Thank You. Yes, my second Published song. I have been using Notessimo for a while, but couldn’t figure out how to upload the songs. Also, I am a real musician. So that probably helps me a lot. XD
very very nice
4.5/5
did not like sheet 12 though, was it supposed to just be like crazy because it was coming to an end? but the very end, sheet 13, was cool
Yes. sheet 12 was unresolved for the end. 
yea thats what I thought
your panning and simple but well fitting beats, were the best part about this song
sheet 6, 8 and 11 are those simple well fitting beats im speaking of, and sheet 0 and 9 for the panning…
but, in the last 2 measures of sheet 9 I dont like the off beat drums, and in sheets 3 and 4 the drums IMO were too loud. other then that the song was nice. 4.5/5 still xD
hmm nice