Mine, yours, ours by Unknown

this is my post-break-up product. (don’t laugh this helps me). Any way I find it odd that this event produced the lightest, airiest song I’ve ever made. In other news, Please critique and give advise because I think this is shaping up to be awesome IMO.

Pretty good, just a few conflicting notes here and there. Dunno whether those were intentional.
Sorry to hear about your break-up. Those are always hard. :( How are you coping now?

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Tuba and Flute make a good combination.

I’m fine now Clearwater. Where are the conflicting notes, I’ll fix them. Also thanks aliens!

By conflicting notes I mean that they sound out-of-tune or they’re a whole or half step that doesn’t sound good.
Measures: 2, 8, 10.

Really nostalgic in a RPG to be in a cool mood. Reminds me a graveyard in daylight. Extend and try few drums, maybe some guitar strings will help to keep it scary