it was a pretty good song… waay to repetitive (use 7 and 8 alot less), especially the violins they got kinda annoying after a while. also, the metal guitar clashed with the fender strat too much. But over i’d give it 6.5/10 (this is on a very critical scoring perspective [I would give it 8/10 on a non-critical scoring perspective]).
yeah, i know it was kind of repetitive and i realize it could get annoying. looking back on this song… eh… it could be better. i focus too much on what it WOULD sound like with lyrics, and i lose my concentration and the concept of the song itself. but thanks for the critique!