I think it would be a little better if there was a sheet between the beat at the very beginning and the first occurrence of string instruments. To me, it felt like there was no tension building up and so it sounded unorthodox to hear the strings right then without any apparent lead up (or not enough, I suppose).
I thought it was great and original, though. I love your control over the electronic sound, esp. that rascally space sound, which is a challenge to make sound good.