Nightmare (still unfinished but more to it) by Avenged sevenfold

This has the second verse and 2nd chorus.
i am currently working on the solo which is very compilcated because there is a lot of sweeping.
I just wanted to show you guys this version because i want to know what you think of the mini drum solo at 19.
Again tell me how to improve this song and what mistakes I made.

nice… the metal guitars sound better at 115 then 205 (I think that was the volume of the older version) the drum solo at 19 is cool (is the drum solo in the original song? or are you making it up) if your making it up, I would like to see some more drums and some faster stuff there!

No that is the original part of this song.
When i am done with the whole thing I can rewrite the drums and make it a drum cover

You should have known the price of evil, and it hurts to know that there are no vocaalllsss, yeaahhh.
Otherwise good

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That doesn’t sound much like a mini drum solo. Sounds more like a fill. Anyways, I didn’t have much of a problem with it.

Its good, I think the snares a tad too high pitched though…but otherwise nice cover