I edited the backdrop for the new player.
I recommend using the old player.
Feature this and I’ll write some lyrics. :3
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Right off the bat, Sheet 1 should’ve had the beginning strats a little louder than the new backup ones. It sounds like a cluttered mess.
Sheet 2 sounds okay (its better in the new player because the metal guitar sounds better). The bass drum is really boring (we’ll talk about that later).
Sheet 4 was decent. A Good first verse.
Sheet 5 had some good voxes.
Sheet 6 not bad. Sheet 7 threw sheet 6 out the window, there was no bass except for the downbeats of each measure. Terrible choice. Dragged on boringly.
Sheet 10 was amazing. Highlight of the song. BUT THE BASS DRUM? WHERE WAS IT? ONLY IN A PREDICTABLE SPOT. Rack up the bass drum in sheet 10, seriously.
Next few sheets were just vox sheets that lack any interesting sounds. Male Voxes overlapped, Kalimbas were just bad.
“Guitar solo” was just bad. Oh look, a remix of Sheet 10 that was k. Sheet 19 was the closest thing to sheet 10, except the end sucked.
And by god, I did not expect that ending. A drum ending? Especially with that sophisticated beat. Who would’ve ever thought that bass,snare,bass,snare would ever be used?
TIP: Focus on your bass. Seriously. SERIOUSLY.
Sorry if I sounded extra-malignant here, I was really looking forward to this because Sheet 10 really made my day when I listened to the unfinished version to it.
Sheet 10 - 4.5 / 5
Everything else - N / A
EDIT: This song still has a lot of potential. I suggest working on some of the core parts a lot more. Focus on making it more of a metal song, and use the ideas from Sheet 10 a lot.
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