Once Inside the Arena by Idea

[IdeaSam (Idea)]

New music. I’m not strong to rock, But I did my best! ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ

[First12 (Executioner)]

ermhhhh a bit (censorship). you cut off the wire.

[IdeaSam (Idea)]

@Trash_Ransacker

ermhhhh a bit (censorship). you cut off the wire.

wut

[k_a_r_o_t_s.communit (Unknown Name)]

Me like.

[IdeaSam (Idea)]

@KAROTS

Me like.

Thanks!

[THEFinalBoss (Krawkyz)]

Phrases end extremely strangely and the lead lines don’t have very good melodies.

[IdeaSam (Idea)]

@Krawkyz

Phrases end extremely strangely and the lead lines don’t have very good melodies.

Yep, Thank you for the constructive criticism!

[Minecraft_Noob (Kryptic)]

3/5. I agree with Krawkyz. Also, I feel like you could make the ‘build up’ at the beginning better.