Original Attempt by Blarg

USE OLD PLAYER
u cant say i didnt try tho

Inspired heavily by “Phantasmagoria of the Dyslexic, Senile Serial Killer of Necrophilic Homosapiens”

plz give feedback even tho it’s really short.

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how u make somthin originonion:
step 1: place note
step 2: make note not someone elses note
step 3: upload

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Uhh, the notes belong to somebody?

sounds a bit… odd in some places, i dont know why though

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yes don’t u know

I think I see what you mean kinda. It doesn’t really feel right.

The only weird thing I hear is the trumpet, can’t really judge on that though. I blame it not feeling exactly right on those trumpet accidentals. Could also be me too, but volume balance could be tweaked to adjust for the samples being inherently different loudness. Also, balancing could also maybe help for when things are introduced, perhaps you could have made the trumpets louder in sheet 1 since they’re the new thing there and the only thing taking up the higher notes. Dunno just my take though.

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The trumpet melody sounds great. Just make it a little louder.

It’s definite progress from your last original attempt. Other than balancing out the sample volumes, the first accidental (personally, it sounded odd), and possibly meshing in some more distinct atmospheric textures in there (to differentiate from the Rhodes/Ac.Guitar stack); I like where it’s going.

tbh, i still know close to nothing about key signatures. May you point out which note is an accidental?
I made a MIDI out of this and it told me it was in Ab Major. From the looks of it, Gb is the accidental. Can you tell me if you are referring to the Acoustic Guitar or the Trumpet?

trumpet, the Gb note in measure 2 of sheet 2