Another original piece, courtesy of the arrangement wonder that is CtelinAjira ( 
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Enjoy.
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Wow, this is even better than the last one! The melody in sheet 10 is my favorite part.
Wondering when Kamarai will come along and tell me about whatever I DIDN’T do correctly.
Still confident that I’ll get a high rating from him.
Please tell me this gets featured.
yea another original piece! sheet 15 was nice.
I think the drums were a little to loud here and their.
4/5
another original… =D
Why are the bass drums the same rhythm as the beginning of
Move Along - All American Rejects?
Percussive organ was too quiet in the beginning.
The end of Sheet 8+9 was odd.
Most Percussive Organ melodies are too quiet.
Reverse Cymbals at the end of Sheet 10 Broke my headphones.
I didn’t want it to loop, but I guess it’s fine that way.
This was better than your first original by far.
4.5/5 Sheet 13 was the best.
Loved this.
I’ve never heard that song, so I had no idea I was imitating that song for the intro.
That moment when apparently your opinion matters 0o I’m flattered. Anyway I think I’ll pull a StarWars here and do a longer review. (Oh and this is just, so you know, the 3rd time today I’ve tried to write my review… I kept getting pulled away from my computer. I WILL REVIEW THIS DANGIT).
Anyway, on to my thoughts on the song. Since there is no way I’m not going to say what I think when you are waiting for it 
I feel obligated lol
Sheets 0,1 and 2: Okay so you start out with a fairly simple intro. It sets a sort of tense mood, and I like that. But I don’t care for Bass #1 myself. It doesn’t seem to be bothering other people that much, but I prefer the Low Piano. Its not too much different sound wise, but I think the sound it has isn’t so annoying 
But for these 3 sheets its quite distracting from the drum progression to me. And being only one note I don’t think it should be. Its also REALLY LOUD. 300% x 2? I didn’t like the idea of 400% volume.
I would also recommend possibly Damant Spectrum. It works wonders with the Clean Electric Guitar.
Sheets 3, 4, and 5: Okay so now you introduce a nice bass riff. I like it. But Bass #1 just overpowers everything. I don’t like that very much. At all. But then came sheet 5. The moment the sweet sound of Metal Guitar replaced Bass #1. Your buildup is going quite nicely, despite my dislike of Bass #1. I’m liking the song so far.
Sheets 6 and 7: In comes the Percussion Organ. I really liked it a lot. This seems to be getting better by the sheet. But your synths in sheet 7 seem to lack any real presence at all. They seemed to be just kinda there. So IMO sheet 7 needs a bit of work, but its fine. It gets the job done somewhat.
Sheet 8 and 9: I love these two sheets. Excuse me while I loop them. My only problem is with the last measure of both of them. Your snares go off the normal beat. If it was more like the second measure I would have no problem. Also the random fender. Come on. You couldn’t have led into a fender solo somewhere in the song from that? I think you should add on one.
Sheet 10 and 11: Your drums seem somewhat empty here to me But otherwise these are great sheets. The vox was a nice touch. I love your tom rolls. I’m practically drooling from them. But then comes those reverse cymbals at the end of sheet 10. Oh lord. I’m hearing quite a bit of static. Sheet 11 was good at the start. Then midway through you bring back the intro. Ugh no.
Sheet 12: What differentiates this from other sheets? But anyway, normal song progression here, nothing special or out of the ordinary. Nothing I have said already either.
Sheets 13 and 14: The percussive organ. You definitely know how to use it. But bass #1 still drones loudly in the background. Still continuing to distract me with its presence.
The rest of the song: This loops back nicely. But I wish it wasn’t a loop and more a full song. I think you could expand some, add a solo (Please do a fender solo or a percussive organ solo. I would die. And die happily).
4.3/5 ~ Needs some work here and there but easily earns this without a second thought.
Now excuse me. I have a sheet 8 to set on repeat for the next hour.
Okay, damn. I was happy with sheet 8, but this is over the top.
I was more happy with sheets 10, 13, and 15, personally.
this reminds me of muse.