I a small feeling this might get featured. fingers crossed!
Those are some verry verry VERRY loud guitars D:
That was cool, but, as Hellstick said, the guitars are to loud… Also, why Submarine?
I liked this, a lot.
Two thoughts:
- Add an echo effect to that cool tubular melody.
- Make the transition to and the chorus after all this so it doesn’t get repetitive.
I just thought it fitted… did it?
It did, but I personally think it’s a little simple to just ‘repeat your succes’…
Good point 
I do agree, but it may be too far into the song now, however, it is my turn and ill see what i can do i guess…