Pentatonic Rock With Xylophones V1.2 by Timothy Verbist

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I listened to 2 out of 4 parts Ace told me: About the Cymbal & the Snare.

I added the Snare on the parts which are needed & did put a Cymbal of the beginning of my sheet to make the drums sound better.

But i’ll work on the Melody to give it more power, but not to much & i’ll make the end shorter in a moment.

And i’ll make the Bass quieter like Captain Emerald told me.

I still need more criticism, go ahead to criticise this song.

WHY DIDNT YOU READ THE WHOLE COMMENT? THAT WAS IMPORTANT AND IT WAS REAL CRITISISM. IT’S WHAT YOU’VE BEEN ASKING FOR!!!

That’s not what I meant when I said 2 and 4. I thought you knew your music theory.

“place a cymbal at the beginning of your song to make your drums sound better”

You still have to edit the the drums…

Response to: You still have to edit the drums…

Erm, like how?

Response to: WHY DIDNT YOU READ THE WHOLE COMMENT? THAT WAS IMPORTANT AND IT WAS REAL CRITICISM. IT’S WHAT YOU’VE BEEN ASKING FOR!!!

Erm… Ofcourse that was real criticism i meant what ace Told me. I SHOULD edit MY STUPID DRUMS!

Maybe Ace should reply his criticism.

You edit the drums. IT’S NOT THAT HARD TO UNDERSTAND.

He did, in your last update. You should really pay people the criticise your songs.

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