PLEASE I WOULD LIKE YOUR COMMENTS

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#1

Hello,

I am wanting to enter this song (Its unfinished at the moment) into a competition this year. http://www.youngcomposerschallenge.org/

I would like to know what you think of it. The one thing is… I cant have any help writing it (obviously… its for a challenge) so if you could be “vague” about things you don’t like (So like, that section is a bit short/long, that part doesn’t seem to fit well, etc…) that could be changed. It is called Upon Morn. (The video is just blank)

Upon Morn

Thank you very much. I hope this topic is ok…

Edit: Wow, the audio quality got even worse facepalm

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#2

Beautiful.

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#3

This song gives me a visualization of the sun emerging from behind the mountains in the distance. The song also feels very strong and triumphant, almost like you were “rising” to the skies. The combination of the brass and wind instruments really gives a sense of glory, and the softness of the strings and flutes are a nice touch to emphasize the brightness of the song.

However, it also sounds like it could use a couple tweaks. Maybe throw in more percussion in the beginning, but make it so that it sort of “rolls” in and rings out. Timpanis are an ideal choice for this.

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#4

^ thanks! Yea you got a lot of the “picture” of the song.

Here is a little caption I wrote about the song.

Listen… as peaceful Dawn turns to majestic Noon. You might even get the last glance of the stars before the sun washes them away in its powerful rays!

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#5

so beautiful! <3

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#6

Good job buddy. I r produ duv buddeh. ;.)

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#7

Needs moar cowbell :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

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