Rap beat by The Zaxx

If you want to rap, rap to this. Note that this is meant to loop.

It’s… a’aight (is that what rapping folk say? I honestly have no idea).

Anyway, as a listener a couple of things annoy me:
-The acoustic guitars at the B and C notes overlap and since it’s a halfstep it IRKS me so much…
-The cymbals should be longer at the end of sheet 1. They’re too short-sounding, so move the cymbal back a beat and elongate it or use a different cymbal.
-The guitars in general don’t sound very rappy. (Again, I don’t really know, I’m just going off of the rap songs I’ve heard blasting out of my cousin’s car and the few Eminem song’s I’ve got on my iTunes.)

Beat’s goodish, though, 2.5 outta 5, homie.

NO! just no.
1/5 my mind is rotting

This… isn’t… really rap??

Shit

Wut?

I’ve tried so hard to please people, yet the result is bad reviews.

I dont know wat it is either.

I didn’t like this, Zaxx, try harder!

1/5 im sorry!