Rap Beat by Timothy Verbist

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#1

This is an attempt to a Rap beat, criticize it.

#2

Not a rap beat.

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#3

I agree ^^

#4

Drums are too syncopated for a rap beat.
The synth should be more minor, rather than major, and should include more variety, and should have a shorter loop.

#5

Is criticism your form of joy now? #criticisetheworld 2014

#6

@aliens
How can you know what you are doing is wrong, if no one tells you.
(besides common sense)

#7

Well, I meant like (if you read the description.) it almost sounds like he made the song just for people to criticise it.

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