its done bitches
maybe get a band together play it at your high school prom
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Some of your lyrics are offbeat.
Why are the vocals guttural and off-rhythm?
Usually I wouldn’t refute criticism entirely, but having the lyrics offbeat is purposeful here. As long as they start in the right spot, the rest can be down to interpretation. Having it all completely on beat would be fairly boring (unless the samples loaded incorrectly and it’s playing them at the wrong time, and that would be a player issue).
lol
I dont know this undertale song
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what
it’s missing 5 minutes of material
Needs more phlegm.
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okay, here’s my constructive criticism:
get rid of the creepy singing
get rid of all that crazy loud guitar/bass/bass drum
make it not earrape
its death metal boi
it needs creepy singing
it needs all the crazy loud guitar/bass/bass drum
it needs the earrape
it could be grindcore with a lot of debuffees
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5/5