She's Gone by Hellstick

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#1

Randomly thought up a melody and had to notessimo it:P
I quite like the result and would love to hear what you guys think. Much like everything else i upload this is not a full song. However, i MIGHT actually work a bit more on this one… Dont get your hopes up though:)

By the way, i dont know if i like the title, so if you guys have any suggestions i’d be glad to hear them:)

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#2

That’s really good, you should try making a Dubstep song.

#3

I think it’s good. I thought it a tad boring though. The drums didn’t fit the melody. The bass was too loud. The sort of stuff that can be fixed easily.

#4

Thanks for the critique. I’ll make sure to lower the bassline if i continue to work on this. It is indeed too loud.
As for the drums… Well, im not gonna change those… At least not a whole lot:P I quite like them as they are now. I suppose your not going to like it when i say im planing to make this into some sort of electornic drum n bass track of sorts:P

#5

You know, I don’t care, as long as it sounds good.