Well, if you’re looking for kiss-ass comments instead of useful noteworthy commentary…
Yeah, it sounds great!
But ,if you’re looking for helpful criticism that would undoubtedly help you in the long run…
WRONG! ALL WRONG
First of all, the violin in the first note was… just… OFF. I don’t know, it didn’t sound right, listen to it a few times and you’ll know what I mean. AND THE violin chords later on were good, but also very sudden. Maybe if it faded in via steady volume increase it would sound less sudden MAYBE (but then again, I know how much of a pain in the ass it is to change each note’s volume one by one and even then there’s still a chance of getting negative results). Also I recommend changing the violin notes from quarter to half notes or 24 beat notes (or whatever the hell those are called) just to see how it sounds.
ALSO, from 11:99-13:01, the trumpet 2 sounds a bit off with that xylophone mimicking it in the back ground.
Actually I’m exaggerating, it’s great. How’s rainbow sea’s going? Abandoned it I see?