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[Ace1257 (Antonim)]

Bars 9-11, 25-27: Bassline shouldn’t follow the melody, causes dissonance.
Bar 20: Melody should play into the next bar instead of just starting on the bar.

[THEFinalBoss (Krawkyz)]

m 37+ the brass needs better articulation. Except for the lead-ups, none of the melody should connect. Almost every note needed to be shortened by at least an eighth.

[Aliens_Exist (ALI=3NS)]

@Antonim

Bars 9-11, 25-27: Bassline shouldn’t follow the melody, causes dissonance.
Bar 20: Melody should play into the next bar instead of just starting on the bar.

@Krawkyz

m 37+ the brass needs better articulation. Except for the lead-ups, none of the melody should connect. Almost every note needed to be shortened by at least an eighth.

Alright.