Smoke On The Water Riff by Deep Purple

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#1

do you know Deep Purple? so Yes try to make a cover from the whole songs from them

#2

The rhythm is off + don’t just use half notes…

#3

Nice Chord Progression. Tempo’s just off. :l

#4

Don’t always use half notes, no offense but I was like “OMGz my ears are hurting” (literally my ears can’t handle that sometimes) and you need to make a faster tempo.

#5

Dont Put Riffs or Demos here please