This is my first original composition. Is gud. :3
(Still doing a few touch ups)
I’m not Savant >w<
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Wow. Not bad.
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I love it because it’s 4/4 but sounds 3/4 on some parts.
bless thou heart
That fucking melody is awesome
I absolutely love the way you end each phrase.
Suggestions (cause I really like this)
completely remove sheets 1 and 3, they detract from the overall song.
Sheet 0 try to change the ending a little more so it doesn’t BLAST IN YOUR FACE. (still really cool). Also make that B at the end of the sheet louder.
Sheet 1 get rid of the unnecessary bass drums at the start.
Also in your drum beat remove the snare. Perhaps add some hi-hat #2 in between each hi-hat to make it feel fast.
Be careful, in most of the sheets there is some clashing where it shouldn’t be (the synth at the beginning.) Some of the clashing is good later on.
Please make your bass more quick. The song feels fast paces but the bass drags.
Awesome so far! Love it!
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Rekt it c:
I lied. Go back to your original drumming. (Except still remove the snares). Also, the really high black synth sounds out of tune. Don’t use it in Sheet 5 like dat.
Also, I still suggest you remove sheet 3.
If you use the old player the black synth sounds out of tune. It doesn’t sound out of tune in the new player, though. Also, sheet three is staying :3
BEST NOTESSIMO SONG EVAR!
(Sorry, Liberation, In My Defense and Melancholy Soldier)
THAT MELODY IS AWESOME.
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inb4 this gets featured when I’m done.
This feels like it’s just a little bit off of being featured.
I realize now the melody is actually too loud, especially when it gets really high.
Also those rolling green synths at the end? I want to hear them, but I can’t! Make them louder, they sound awesome.
The end starts to get repetitive, so maybe change the melody near the end so it doesn’t seem to drag. Or even better, maybe add another small verse between some of the phrases.
The end isn’t good.
The bass should be louder.
I wish the percussion would change up a little bit, but overall its fine.
Measures 35-41 need to have more in them. It’s too empty.
Get rid of those speeding up toms at the start. Just have the roll at the end.
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Guess I gotta remix it once more o3o
Don’t get me wrong I love this.
<3
I want this to be longer; more verses; more melodies. It feels so short because of the nature of the song. Also because I like it.
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