Your songs are definately getting better. Just at some point the vocals were sort of loud, and the light blue guitar doesn’t really sound good that high. I liked the main vocal melody.
i really like this song 
but wait…is this a cover?
This is rock, not metal. Also it is good!
it looks like you took a long time and i give 5/5 stars.
Well, this song took me 2 or 3 hours but still thanks 