hey y’all!
its been forever since i last posted an update for this.
i’ve been very stressed with my job and finishing this school year i never really had time to work on this until about a month ago.
still obv a work in progress.
hopefully ill have more time since its now summer break!
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Good job mate! Your sound is nice and “full”, and i like the theme, but I feel like the track lacks a more defined direction. The buildup at like 1:00 - 1:09 is super intense, but you did such a great job at building intensity that i feel like the segment between 1:09 - 1:32 needs something more. Maybe variation to the melody, or some ominous high pitched string chords or something. Personally i feel like a harder, somewhat electronic beat would go great on top of the war drums in this very same segment, but i realize this might not be the direction you want to take the composition.
Anyway, super nice job! You made a lot of good decisions! 
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Thank you so much for the comment Hellstick! Your feedback is greatly appreciated and I will 100% use your suggestions as I work more on this. Thank you again!
No prob friend! looking forward to see how it evolves:)
It reminds me a bit of this old thing AMALAR RISING! by Hellstick - Songs - Notessimo
Except yours sound cleaner:)