I was bored so i decided to make a piece of alternative Rock so here it is! Tell what to Think!
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I actually wanna fully criticize this instead of a sarcastic comment.
Sheet 0: Why you went with a 7/8 feel for a song is beyond me.
Sheet 1: Not bad. Actually use and build off those chords and you might have something going.
Others: Snares are all bad. Everything was really random.
My only real complaint is the drums and sheet 7.
i really love this song!!! IT SOUNDS AMAZING!!! but take out sheet 4 sheet 4 is all wrong…and get rid of the snares in sheet 5 and your song sounds amazing!!!
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one more thing…continue sheet two because that sounds really neat and would sound good in a song!!! like this one
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Rhodes and organs hardly ever sound good by them selves. only in certain times. They mostly sound the best as a tiny added effect. also at the beginning sometimes it sounded like the guitars needed to be spaced a tiny bit.