I made a new spooky song with a Electric piano & Bass intro, the drums joined in the intro, the intro ends with the Marimba Harmony & the melody are from the Vibes! so here is the result!!
Result = Not spooky.
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can you give me a tip?
Start being spooky
Use simple time signatures - not the 7/4 shit. (This song is 13/4, wtf?)
Use drums that are in time - bass drums are not everything.
A usual drum beat is hi-hats on every beat, bass drum on the downbeat, snare on the upbeat.
Learn real chord progression.
Learn how to take criticism instead of twisting it into something that you THINK makes you look good (but it doesn’t).
Stop using the same instruments. Do different things.
I agree with 90% of that. Definitely fix the drum beats. But the song is just in phrases of 26 or 13, but it is in 4/4 not 13/4. The chord progression are fine, but write an actual melody BEFORE then add chords as BACKGROUND, not have just a chord progression with a weird drumbeat and call it a song.
Agreed on the drums part.
You guys are all right. T… It’s annoying, not spooky, when are you going to get that through your thick virtual skull?
I would say something offensive, but I’m a newbie, I apparently can’t take criticism (looking at you, TFB), and I can’t remember the word I was gonna use to offend.