Spooky Song #4 by Ghost Of T.Verbist

[Timothy_Verbist]

OK i was Bored again so i decided to do another creepy song with the volume on full power so its a bit a bazooka, enjoy & tell what you think if you dare

[George_C_Van_Liew (not here)]

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[Timothy_Verbist]

@George_C._Van_Liew

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whats the matter? I am long Haired and trying to improve! what should i edit?

[icemarioex]

Random. It’s good though, except the synth part. Still random.

[Yellowtail_J44]

@Timothy_Verbist

whats the matter? I am long Haired and trying to improve! what should i edit?

You are improving! the piano part was amazing. =)

You should edit the synths out and focus on the piano because that was pretty good.

[Timothy_Verbist]

@Yellowtail_J44

You are improving! the piano part was amazing. =)

You should edit the synths out and focus on the piano because that was pretty good.

thanks Yellowtail

[Timothy_Verbist]

@mr._ice

Random. It’s good though, except the synth part. Still random.

hmm there are more things i have to work one

[THEFinalBoss (Krawkyz)]

There’s no introduction, no lift, no chorus, no verses…THERE IS NO SONG STRUCTURE.
THERE IS
NO
SPOON.

[MusicMaster]

@THEFinalBoss

There’s no introduction, no lift, no chorus, no verses…THERE IS NO SONG STRUCTURE.
THERE IS
NO
SPOON.

i kind of agree. It’s like a story. It needs to have everything, not just one part.

[leifeday]

@THEFinalBoss

There’s no introduction, no lift, no chorus, no verses…THERE IS NO SONG STRUCTURE.
THERE IS
NO
SPOON.

the same can be said for most of his songs