OK i was Bored again so i decided to do another creepy song with the volume on full power so its a bit a bazooka, enjoy & tell what you think if you dare
whats the matter? I am long Haired and trying to improve! what should i edit?
Random. It’s good though, except the synth part. Still random.
You are improving! the piano part was amazing. =)
You should edit the synths out and focus on the piano because that was pretty good.
hmm there are more things i have to work one
There’s no introduction, no lift, no chorus, no verses…THERE IS NO SONG STRUCTURE.
i kind of agree. It’s like a story. It needs to have everything, not just one part.
the same can be said for most of his songs