Spooky Song #4 by Ghost Of T.Verbist

OK i was Bored again so i decided to do another creepy song with the volume on full power so its a bit a bazooka, enjoy & tell what you think if you dare :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:


whats the matter? I am long Haired and trying to improve! what should i edit?

Random. It’s good though, except the synth part. Still random.

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You are improving! the piano part was amazing. =)

You should edit the synths out and focus on the piano because that was pretty good.

thanks Yellowtail

hmm there are more things i have to work one

There’s no introduction, no lift, no chorus, no verses…THERE IS NO SONG STRUCTURE.

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i kind of agree. It’s like a story. It needs to have everything, not just one part.

the same can be said for most of his songs