This is Stuff, I guess…
Critique this as if you hate it (be harsh here pls)
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Rhythm is too repetitive for the bottle blow, change it up a tad.
Odd transition, doesn’t quite work.
Try to change up the harp slightly, it’s a little samey if you focus on it.
Not the biggest fan of the slides down, the second one seems like filler imo.
I quite like it though.
Ya that’s basicallly true XD
actually, It sounded different originally and then I realized that the sheet was too long, and I had to remove some stuff.
I happen to like the slides down, actually.
Try varying the strings a bit. I also feel like you’re lacking in percussion.
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I’m ALWAYS lacking in percussion
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