OK i was bored so i decided to make a longer song so here it is! so tell me what you think!
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PERFECT. Except with the synth solo and piano…
Sheet 14 is the best sheet.
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thanks, only sorry for my Synth Solo & my Piano part :l
nice work on sheet 12-14 (only needed one sheet 12)… thats all though…
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so you liked that C minor Pentatonic? so do i
P.S.: only sorry for that another sheet 12
Oh my god, you make better bass than I do
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nice chords in sheet 12. cool!
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thanks
hey, thanks
This is what you can make if you take your time.
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i think 13 and 14 could be made in to a song
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You have some hold on rhythm now. The reason sheet 13 was so good was because you actually changed the rhythm a few times. Most of the song was just either quarter-quarter-quarter-quarter… or halfnote-halfnote-halfnote-halfnote… Complex rhythms are moreover the better sounding ones, like in Sheet 13.
Your songs need transitions.
You also need some better design (Melody, Harmony, Chord, Drums, and BASS).
This was a step in the right direction, but as always, every song can be better.
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100% Your best work yet.
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I havent even HEARD this song and it has good comments
WTF HAVE YOU DONE?!?!
He seems to have a Pink Floyd view on Rock if the end is supposed to be Rock.
it has a Pink Floyd feeling, but the pentatonics are mine
No repitition complaints, TFB?
OMG! Starburst likes it
, that’s awesome!
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