I think had a good turn out. I hope you guys like it. Enjoy 
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transitions; 3into4 lots of instruments in sheet 3 then all the way down to one instrument in sheet 4 doesn’t flow all that well, and you did it in 3 places, 7into8,and 11into12; 11into12 sounded the worst because you have lots of high notes and then BOOM next sheet you have all low notes coming from the bass
I see this happen in lots and lots of your songs, like on betrayal I told you the transition to the rhodes sounded bad, and then you made decrescendoing (is that a word? xP) fenders to make it flow better. dont be so drastic, make it flow…
3/5… oh yea, im workin on our collab, its gana be an orchestration song.
Sheet 3 eminded me of almost every pink floyd song in existance
SO. MUCH. ORANGE GUITARS!!! 5/5