So…
It’s finally finished… Maybe…
If it’s fine with you guys then…
It’s finished…
So overall, sorry to say this to you aliens, but I have been doing most of the work… This has really been just a large draft since the stuff that aliens had done was either very short or really bad (sorry). I hope my parts were good though…
What I did: Added sheets 43 - 56
Edited sheets: 41 and some others
There are quite a few unused sheets from aliens… And me I think…
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Listen in the old player for better guitars.
Very nice ending (liked the violins) to a… not very good (if even that) song… I did like that ending though.
Sorry, that’s my opinion. some little sections, on their own, were ok. The song on a whole? Shmeh.
I think that the damant spectrum guitars in the beginning should have had a bit different panning from each other, they made it a bit harder to hear the different things being played by each. That’s really the big problem with that instrument aside from it’s quietness. I liked what you were doing with it aside from that.
The drums took too much of the stage a lot of the time, they were too loud often and distracted from the melody. I also had a bit of a problem with the metal guitar, it was way too loud way too often. It really mucked up a lot of the transitions because of how loud it suddenly became, most notably in places like sheets 3-4.
I don’t really like how there’s so many slower sections from 20-31. Slower sections in which not much is happening is fine, but I feel as if they were a tad too piled up here.
I liked the subtlety of the energy instrument towards the ending, and the way this song ended was very well done.
The song didn’t flow together that well, and a lot of the time the strings seemed very, err, random.
Overall, I’d give the song a 3-3.5/5.
I enjoyed this but I have to complain about something else: you posted far too many unfinished copies here before submitting this completed version. The novelty has since worn off.
Don’t get me wrong; I really like this composition. But for your next collaborations, I suggest passing your .note files via Outlook or Skype or whatever media–keep it discreet. Don’t post every progress here or else we’ll have the thousand and one reiterations in our ear before hearing the full work.
Again, good work. I really like this.
Aliens
Mostly Aliens Kinda Me
Me ._. And a little bit of aliens : 0
All me : )
ALIENS…
Anyway…
Thanks for the great input! I really appreciate it!
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Dont blame everything on aliens.
Even IF he did do something you and someone else dosent like… dont come back when someone critiques it and say “ALIENS DID THAT”.
Not good bro.
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Now go cry in a hole.
I really only kept in aliens part because I didn’t want it to be a song that was just me doing all the work (which it mostly was though).
Also…
I never truly said that this was the finished product.
Chip, stop being so mean spirited. It’s not good to blame everything on someone who’s kind enough to collaborate with you, or anyone really. You quoting yourself and being a dick to more people proves nothing aside from what has been speculated originally.
He is telling the truth DD12…