By measure:
1: Sounds kind of bad
2= sounds okay, but random
3= Sounds like a song from kirby air ride =P but measure 3 is awesome, it sounds great
4= 3.2/5
5= Seems redundant, but i don’t know, since it’s so short.
6= HOLY SHIT WTF. That sounds utterly terrible, like a pictosong.
7= Pretty awesome.
8= NEVER PUT ANY NOTE THAT HIGH. Also, the clean Elec guitars don’t sound good at all.
9= some notes sound beautiful, some make me want to throw up.
10= Might sound better if those chords that are way too high inbetween the main ones were removed.
11=Meh.
12= The first fender sounds off, but the rest is good.
13= Has potential, but it sounds like ear rape. You shouldn’t have ruined the good melody on the fenders by spamming upwards.
14= Remove the fenders and it’ll sound good.
15= The fenders are early, and the strings sound kind of bad/random
16= sometimes the guitars sound a little bad, but it’s still really goood on the strings.
17= Pretty good.
18= Ugh. doesn’t sound like music.
19= It sounds okay, but measure 20 is completely different, so it makes it sound random.
20= Would sound awesome were it not for those uber high notes.
99= drums could use work, but the chords are amazing.
IF you listen to what i said here, your song should be amazing.