The palace (Avant-Techno) UNFINISHED by Unknown

This is my latest song dont hate but i would like any tips/pointers
enjoy,
pumkinsantears (rnote)

I expected something more classy or royal.

Yeah im still not sure that’ll be the title when its all said and done. u like the song?

It’s okay, just a bit random, and random is fine.

Although, you’ve got some volume issues, like I can barely hear that Aahh #1. Make it a bit louder! Oh, and a few chords may be nice as well… and a more fixed rhythm.

I like sheet 12.

derr

the final boss what the heck are u on about