The Return of the Feeble by SteveHarris

After the train wreck that was my metal song, I decided to slow things down a bit. I was listening to Hand of Doom by Black Sabbath and thought I should make another song that uses too much Bass #4 again. This has nothing to do with The Feeble but I just felt like a bit of redemption after all the sh*t I put out. I’m not saying it’s great, just… better. Tell me what you think and how it could be better.

Using the bass in the treble clef isn’t most ideal.
Put a cymbal at the beginning of a sheet to give your drums more power. I like to stack cymbals to add power.
Using the cymbals in the middle of your sheet or in succession isn’t ideal, either.
The Reverse Cymbal and Open Hi-hat #3 are better options for when you want the crash to fade out.

Thanks, I’ll keep it in mind