this is definitely one of the best songs Ive made so far, and for a long time, but don’t give all your attention to me, give some of it my friend, Cameron, he gave me some suggestions, helped make the song from beginning to end, and this is the first song i ever made with tempo changing, and replaying parts, please comment and rate reasonable rates, please give honest opinions of the song, and when cameron gets an account, i will give you his screen name.
I’m sorry, towards the top left corner it should say dynamyte, it screwed something up and it says guest, sorry and give all attention to dynamyte
Well … it needs a lot of work.
Firstly, pay attention to your rhythm, the notes should be mostly on the verticle lines, not on the spaces. The melodies have irregular rhythm, you should try to keep it even.
Also your instrument choice is unusual. I’m sorry to say, but very little people use the Frets or Damant Spectrum Muteds because they aren’t very powerful. Also you change instrument a lot, try to stick with just a few.
Thirdly, although it isn’t as bad as completely random notes, you should work on sticking to a scale or something, because that would help enormously.
Fourthly the song structure is very irregular, try and keep to the same theme and use recurring elements and repetion to keep a stable base.
And that’s all.