Hey, Ty! I’ve been working on Polluant for you and I’ve been messing around with it. I forgot to put my name in besides yours if you notice.
But I think this might help. I thought that the song might need a little breakdown part to it. So try and see if this works.
uchihakyle told me to check out Last Song for my project. I like it. Even though it’s old (under 1500 id#), I’d like to use it. Mind if I do so?
Wow…totally ignored…
fishrocker- sure, let me know how it turns out
Unknowned- sorry i took forever but i got grounded
i think it sounds good, but i dont want to change the synthesizers to much cuz it’s part of the beat. im thinking about using the beat in a different song but idk yet
Ok. I just want to say that your songs are great, although most of them sound like game music to me for some reason… perhaps that’s just becouse I am half playing a game at the moment and listening to your audio’s. anyways OK for the unnamed song there is a ton of paths to chose from. To me it sound’s like the song you would hear when about to battle on some kind of holy ground (thus defiling it lol). anyways about the paths I suggest that you suddenly brake into the tune and speed it up a bit.
The escape is a good overall but you might want to think about cutting it up into different sheets and repeating some of the sheets. ether that or add in another rhythm in a higher pitch.In fact doing both would be nice too. I did listen to all of your songs (so far, and all that were up today) but I’ve always had a talent (there really inst anything else you can call it since it comes so naturally) to forget things that only happened more then 15 minuets ago.
to comment on them all would probably take going through it all again and it is 1:02 AM where I am liveing right now so I need to get to bed.lol. I really should stop staying up so late.
Lastly you’re missing the option that suits me best “Of course not(actually I am more of a jock ass than a smart ass, but dont forget to swap the vowels )” sigh… oh well. I guess I will go with the smart ass one
Hey, Ty…if you’re still awake, you wanna do a collab?
I was thinking something like Mortal Kombat rock or something like NemesisTheory’s “Russian Roulette.”
Look it up, it’s pretty awesome.
ugh i can NOT get a good song done. i’ve got like 3 good starts but nothing else. im so mad i could put a devil smiley on this post!
i really want to get at least one done before the new year so im gonna finish a song whether it’s epic or not
btw sorry bout the wait, it’s been a while yes, but im grounded on the weekdays til i die basically so it’s gonna take a while
Well, since Overcharge did not do so well…I decided to remix your songs again.
This is unfinished but it’s midnight right now and I am freaking tired and ready to hit the hay…but what do you think.
I’ve only got three sheets down. 16 and 17.
The problem I had with both versions was the drums. They were over-powering, but in reality it was just the high-hat. In my opinion, the only high-hat thaat can be stacked and made better like that is closed #2. Also, in sheet three, measure three was off-key. Also, the lack of a solo made this short 2 minute song repetitive. This song really got me going for a solo, then left me hanging. 7 out of 10.
Unknowned-i liked it. i just cant believe you didnt completely trash sheet 15. i dont even know why that was there, must’ve been an accident on my part. but i like it anyway
Star wars w.e w.e- i get what you mean but it doesnt sound bad to me, maybe it sounds different on ur speakers or headphones but it sounds good over here, buts thats still my opinion
anyone else that cares- im trying to get a good song finished but i cant. im close but i keep getting a bunch of glitches that wont let me edit stuff without getting rid of it altogether. so by next year i’ll get one done (not a promise)
The Deserted. short but ok. im still stuck in a rut. happy thanksgiving
The Deserted was short and sweet. I liked it. It had that feeling of isolation and desertedness. 4.5/5
Compromised. go now. listen.
Very good 8.5/10. Power drums got me going, and using a snare in place of a high-hat is approved by me. I didn’t even know what instrument it was when the Muted Trumpet came in, nice use of that. Also, near the end, the drum stops and then the snare/high-hat beat brings it back, liked that too. My only problem is that there wasn’t too much in it right? Besides the drum set, I counted 2 strings instruments (metal guitar and strings #2 I think) and one brass (muted trumpet). To make matters worse, the only instrument that hit notes quicker than a half note was the guitar. Personally, I just think that this song can easily be seen as unfinished, there’s barely anything in it. A decent job though.
yea, my computers been acting strange lately and i just wanted to get the song out before i had to reformat my hard drive or something (it’s already happened once this year ). it’s open for remixing or adding to or w.e and i may be going back to it later.
You know me, I’ll remix it.
I like it. It has an erie feel to it. I almsot never thought I’d like a song with drums that powerful, but I did. The emptiness made it good. I think too many instruments would’ve taken away from it, but also too little instruments would too. The last note was very loud.
Overall:4.4/5
Great
it’s been a while but here’s another. enjoy and criticize.
i figured out how to fix a glitch that has been screwing me over this entire time and now i am happy. enjoy the song