Well, listen for yourself 
Pretty good.
Needs more substance; do continue.
Please explain to me what you mean by substance.
Not sure if unnamed or unarmed.
There doesn’t seem to be a lot going on; it feels a bit bland, boring, and repetitive at parts. Everything else is quiet compared to the lead synth. It is an introduction, and that might be why I feel this way…
Just my two cents.
Makes more scence now, as i go on im sure ill iron out lots of mistakes.
Doesn’t seem like it has a key.
When it comes to key im clueless, im not a musician