Underwater Ballad by Skeletee

A song I’m currently working on. What do you all think? any ideas or help?

Comments and critics are always apprieciated!

Make your melodies more interesting.

I think it’s good. Although, I do agree with TFB, the melody’s a bit plain. Also, some of the notes sound a bit off tune… I dunno whether or not that was intensional (is that spelled right?)

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Thank you both alot! I am unsure how to correct, as I don’t have a great ear, but still, thank you!