Not finished just yet, I would like feedback so I can know if it sucks or not 
I have sucky headphones cause I broke my good ones, and stole some from my school.
So feedback would be very nice!!
While I do somewhat agree with Octo (sheet 2 could do with a light melody, which could build into a more powerful one), I do really like this song and it’s potential. Can’t wait to hear the finished song. Also, add some drumming!