Unfinished Song FIRST UPDATE by Timothy Verbist

[Timothy_Verbist]

Here is an update: Added organs & Bass.

IF you have suggestions or criticisms for this, put them in your comments.

[First12 (Executioner)]

i hope something new m/r in the back

[_Anthony (qoby)]

Cool vibraphone melody. Too much I vi IV V, I vi IV V, I vi IV V, I vi IV V. You should simplify rather than pile on. At least cut the metal guitar and the organs.

[Timothy_Verbist]

@qoby

Cool vibraphone melody. Too much I vi IV V, I vi IV V, I vi IV V, I vi IV V. You should simplify rather than pile on. At least cut the metal guitar and the organs.

I’ll add something else instead of the metal guitar & the organs & make this less repetitive.

Thanks for criticism.

[Wikkid_Vommit (CyanSixFour)]

i don’t like the metal guitars.