Unfinished Songs / Demos

not to sure im convinced by all of the accidentals. also the low low metal guitar in the beginning… not to sure I like that. At the point that it ended it was starting to get pretty repetitive hopefully its going to change at least a little from that point. other than that it was good on my part.

They were in the scale, A sharp minor.

Okay.

90 percent of it was a guitar solo. How do I fix this? D:

Yay.

just change the backgrounds a little bit… doesn’t have to be a large shift just something different every phrase atleast.

Yeah, the harmony has been “I” the whole way through XD

Use different chords? I liked the song though.

i cant really think of a way to continue this, at least not well. but i dont want to let this die, its too epic

you got that right times 10. frankly I wouldn’t know what to do either…

If you’re up for a collab suggestion, I’d love to help.

which one of these song should I do first out of the two
this one- #1 song-62497
or this one- #2 ?id=62498

The first one.

That song flows very well, but instead of just introducing an arpeggio at sheet 4 I think it’s time for the intro to end.

Seriously though, that is quite an epic start. Only problem is the title, which is a little cliche. Try to go for a little more artistic title instead k?

KK (any suggestions on what instrument for the main “chorus” instrument? I don’t want to fall back on metal or fender…)

And about the title, i just put what came to me and i was going to make a better one later lol

Uhh…was in the middle of making a cover for a song but I’m about to go to cello class so…

?id=62694

'Nuff said.

@Dan: It was good, but the low grand pianos in the beginning were fairly dissonant. The cymbal - snare combo was good, but the cymbal sounds better longer. The strings should’ve been louder when the drums came in.

Sorry about the double post.

EDIT: Random song from my archives.
Fifths at the beginning

Can someone help me? The tab I have doesn’t have the vocals. Could someone do the vocals by ear for me please?