not to sure im convinced by all of the accidentals. also the low low metal guitar in the beginning… not to sure I like that. At the point that it ended it was starting to get pretty repetitive hopefully its going to change at least a little from that point. other than that it was good on my part.
That song flows very well, but instead of just introducing an arpeggio at sheet 4 I think it’s time for the intro to end.
Seriously though, that is quite an epic start. Only problem is the title, which is a little cliche. Try to go for a little more artistic title instead k?
@Dan: It was good, but the low grand pianos in the beginning were fairly dissonant. The cymbal - snare combo was good, but the cymbal sounds better longer. The strings should’ve been louder when the drums came in.