Unfinished Songs / Demos

yikes…well…I think the title fits…

Um, well I know you aren’t much into the negative criticism, but…I just can’t find much on the positive end. The percussion is off from the melody by quite a bit and the low Acoustic chords don’t quite mesh well at all with the rest. I think you may have the right idea, but it definitely needs some work.

Why does the title fit it? I was just coming up with something random that sounded cool, really!

Recession

Updated!!

I started composing this afternoon, now it’s night and I only did this (I was doig my homework (rock) )

here it is (just the beginning)

Lagalicious!

There’s no lag… o_O

?id=34745/;’

Updated Recession again!!

I plan on finishing this one. I just thought I’d let you guys hear it now because it probably won’t be finished for a week or month or whatever.
U RAVE U LOSE!

Ladies and gentlemen, this is what notessimo was meant to be used for.

Beginning was weird, but the rest… Epic.
Please finish.

Hey DarkDan, your song you said was “Lagalicious” was only a little laggy playing, but really laggy while opening it and stuff but this computer is like, at least 10 years old probably!

Also it sounds funny when you cgange the Sample Rate I think it is

I agree. Use something rather than strings.

Here’s my newest song. Should I continue it?

Thanks, I’m glad you guys liked my song I got kinda stuck on it, but I’ll get back to it eventually.
Here’s something I’ve had in my head in between listening to Isis albums. I’ll probably stretch 2 or 3 melodies into 3 or 4 minutes over the next 4 to 5 weeks.

Meanwhile, I’m looking for a job :confused:

I Made this song for my RPG… tell me what I need to improve/add to the Rest of the song. seriously, pplz. should I add , or mabye more . Idk, tell me what you think.

EDIT: Added In-post song.

Great song!

wow thanks! It’s going to be my first real song, so I want to make it sound real good.

I’m horrible at finishing covers. A Fall Out Boy song and probably the only Fall Out Boy stuff you’ll see on the site. Enjoy

My newest try to make a song, it’s going quite like I expected

take out the id= part to make the imbed work…
or a mod whenever they get a chance could edit it for you…
Whoever’s first