Your welcome
Well, I’m almost done with this song. Does anybody have any suggestions so far?
Wow…im at a loss for words…well except for this
I thought you said you had no creativity and what do we have here a freaking awesome ORIGINAL song
Epicness so far.
for those of you who know this song, This is PRETTY close to it, although, I DID do it by memory (Some of it…), so the begining might be off with the drums… I’ll try to fix it.
And for those of you who think this SMRPG Forest maze, this is an ENTIRELY DIFFERENT SONG with the melody of Forest maze. EDIT: I may update once and a while. (added WAY more drums, NOW see if it sounds like the origional Forest maze!
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Well…the Rawest Forest movie is the SMRPG Forest Theme with a song instead of the main part of the song…I can see how its different though…the begining is different
Fire, I have an unfinished song called Again…so…yeah.
My bad.
It’s okay. I wasn’t expecting to finish it anyway. Keep the title kid. You deserve it.
LOL Unknowned…how would he have known you have a song named that anyway???
Its not on your thread so…ya…there was no way he could have known that he had competition on the title LOL
Most of my trashed songs, I keep as favourites. Here’s the link to Again: I don’t intend on finishing it, and some parts are screwed…so…yah.
listen.php?id=25393
Here comes another one, I pulled that out in one evening, around 40 min of composing
And that last I was composing, forget it for now, I don’t have creativity to finish it anytime soon, so, let’s just bury it for a while aye
Next, here is the intro of my newest song
@Gabriel: Very good, quite catchy, BUT it’s a bit ‘unorganized’ .
Well, here’s a song. Well, it’s a song. It’s NOT rock or techno. And I’ve never made a song with a tempo higher that 220.
CRITIQUE OR DIE PLEASE.
Ok, I like living, so I might as well say a thing or 2.
Let me first say its building up to be one of your best songs but like the rest of your songs, it starts out good but then it winds up going in the wrong direction, all i got to say is don’t make it so damn repetitive.
Repeative songs are a man’s best enemy. Never try to be so repeative. It will screw the song up.
Thanks for the critic Fire, I will try to solve that “problem”
And now my critique (my first BTW)
The drums are awesome, but a bit repetitive, you should add some variations, and the use of trumpet quite fits the song
And to sugestion of a name… Uhm… Anything with epic in the name 
I refuse to critque this song! wha!!! AHHHH!!! augh. (darn I wish I had critqued that song!!!)
This is Anti-StarWars [XD], here to critque this song. There are a few points about this song that caught my attention, such as the Brass and the drumming. Both were magnificent. Unfortunately, I have to admit that it was lacking something…something…ELSE! There’s nothing else to this song, and it quickly lost me without a changing atmosphere or a satasfying bass line. Overall, it is a good start, and I hope to be able to hear the finished product.
This is a multi-section post.
Part 1: Critique
The very repetitive drums yet they were quite nice.
Lagged this thing I’m using up! I’m using a pretty crappy lap top but either way…
Part 2: My New Song Demo/Unfinished Version
Here it is. Melancholy. Note: It won’t be as repetitive later.
Please critique as much as you want just if all of you give overwhelming amounts I’ll get very very sad.
Didn’t a guy here used to have a song called Melancholy?
inserts elixier into body augh…there. Hey guys! I’m alive again! Onto the critique: oh wait I can’t. The reason is that this song is too short for me to suggest anything yet, maybe add another 30 seconds or something. All I can say is this: it’s not repetitive yet, just be sure to not make it repetitive.
im making a thing, too tired to keep working now. it’s 5am.