Unfinished Songs / Demos

Seriously anthony makes a great point ive been thinking about this little “war” people have been happening on this thread and the word demo isnt included for just no reason…

This is the kind of stupid things that makes people leave…and dont have all that many regular posters here…so i hope it ends…please…if you dont like this thread, post them as previews or something in another thread (which i don’t recommend) and if memory serves me there IS a thread other than this for song you will never finish…

EDIT: here you go UP FOR GRABS THREAD
I hope that helps some

Children Childern CHILDREN! I feel I can say that because I believe I’m the oldest one in here…(can anyone top 24…25 next month?)

This little tiff has definitely gone a little to far so I’m going to try to clear the air here.

First, Star Wars. Yes, you are entitled to your opinion. And if you think the thread’s stupid then, well, what can we do, that’s your opinion. But if you have negative feeling toward this thread, first off it might be best to leave that bit of information to yourself and not visit here anymore, but if you have the urge to express that opinion, I would suggest finding a more mature way to put it. Maybe something like “I don’t really like this thread that much because etc. etc.” Saying “I think this thread’s stupid” is basically begging for an argument to start. There’s nothing wrong with stating an opinion, but just make sure to find proper wording before stating it so something like this doesn’t happen again.

Second, Anthony. Yes I do understand you are trying to defend a thread that a majority of the Notessimusicians enjoy, but is swearing about that really necessary? Yes I understand I swear, but that’s usually in the context of just talking about random shit…kinda like that. Swearing probably is not approiate when trying to argue, simply because it just adds fuel to the fire. I also understand that you calmed down and admited that that probably wasn’t the best action, and that’s good, but I just wanted to take the time to remind not just you, but everyone, please try to avoid swearing in arguments.

If we all can keep our cool and talk this stuff through more logically I think we can prevent this stuff from happening in the future. I understand nobody’s perfect and things like this will happen, but maybe refer to this post before starting something that could lead to this.

And finally, if for some reason this arguement still can’t come to a conclusion, please continue it in the “Talk about Stuff” Thread in the Off-Topic General section. This is definitely a last resort, but if this does keep on going here I may have to go ahead and lock this thread for a couple days just to force this argument somewhere else because remember, this is an Unfinished Songs/Demos Thread, not a Let’s Argue about Whether this Thread Should be Here Thread. Don’t worry mods, like I said this is a last resort thing, and it’d only be a couple days, in no way should this thread be removed.

Now with all that said I really don’t want to see another post about this, let’s move this on topic right now and start posing unfinished songs and commenting on them from this point forward.

Okay guys, I already said (this is for the third time) that I’m ending this. How many times should i say it? this is a song thread, not a discussion one. And to think all I said was: “what a stupid thread.” I’m sory for being so blunt with my own opinions and won’t do it again. But seriously, I hope that this post is the last we hear of it.
EDIT: oh yeah…about the “this thread should be deleted,” I was saying that out of spite, I’ll go back and edit that part out.

It’s very awesome, it’s very similar (although not EXACTLY equal)

Eruption i thought was great…ive only seen that part on notessimo (rock) i hope someone (hopefully you) finishes it (rock) that would be awesome

About that…I only plan on covering Free Bird, Foreplay/Long Time, More than a Feeling, and Layla. Eruption is a chaotic song of triplets, insane effects, and tempo changes. Despite being only 2 minutes long, I doubt anyone will ever do it.

What band/artist made Eruption? Maybe I’ll take a crack at it.

VAN HALEN

Oh yeeaaahhh! Wow, how did I not know that? o.O

Edit: Ho… ly… shit! There’s no way in hell I’m going be able to do that >.<

Told you

True it is van halen LOL

Hey there guys, I made some adjustments and added some stuf to my newest composing song
I’ve been working on it for days now, and I hope you like (rock)
I don’t quite know what to do with it now, so, if you want, you can edit

hear that

feedback welcome

EDIT: I tried to make Eruption on notessimo once…
It turned out awful (rock)

Good, but the note durations messed some parts up. I really like the transition thing between Sheets 89 and 1. They really tied together I guess you could say.

New song (hoooray (rock) )
This one is a bit more garage punk, and a bit less heavy metal
I actually dig that riff (rock)

sugestions are good too

Sounds good so far. The drums are sexay.

http://notessimo.net/?id=36133

I would love some feedback on what to do. I’m stuck.

Both of you not bad…and it should only get better

I think I did pretty good with the drums, pretty amazing that by adding a simple drum line it makes it not so repetive. Feedback welcome.

Not too bad…the drums DEFINATLY need some work in my opinion
but the strat work was great

Thanks, I mainly at first was expermenting to see how well strat guitar would work as a melody.