Ya, I undertood
Iyan ay astig talaga. Yehey! Limang mga bituin para sa iyo, Hellsitck!
Nakakahiya na tuloy ilagay ang tugtog kong ito.
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It also took me forever to figure out what language that wasXD
Either way… I appreciate the compliment, but i dont understand the second part of your post:S
@Hellstick:
Repetitive: Grinding isn’t a good lead instrument if that’s what your going for.
The end of your drum beat pattern also doesn’t fit the metal guitar well.
@Kalabasa3:
Repetitive: Not much variety! It changed a bit every few phrases, but I didn’t feel that, “Wow, epic transitions” feeling!
The Drums near the beginning are too loud (mainly the bass drum).
It would sound possibly a little better if you got a bass line near the beginning as well.
You’ll have to be specific about what part of the drumming you’re reffering to:S Each of the sheets have a different ending to the drumming…
As for the grinding: Well, i like it:P Its not used often, and i like the sort of dark mood it adds to the track. Im affraid i wont change it.
I never said the grinding was bad; I said it shouldn’t be the lead part.
The end of the drumming such as Sheet 7 Measures 10-15. It doesn’t sound right.
Ooooh, that:P I actually spoke to one of my irl friends a while back who actually said that he particularly liked that part of the beat.
As for the grinding, i don’t concider it as the lead instrument. I mean, it does play a dominating role in the track, but its acompanied a lot by the guitar. Besides, i concider it more of an effect sort of, rather then an actual instrument.
When i started the track it was my idea to make a dark drum and bass track simmilar to my older track “swamp creatures”. If you are not familliar with bands like noisia, spor and dysphemic you probably wont like the screetching and scratching sounds they sometimes use in their tracks. I don’t blame you though. To some people, some of the music i listen to is utter garbage, so since some of my tracks are influenced by said music there’s bound to be parts of it you dont like:)
No, that part is good, I’m just saying it doesn’t fit the guitar.
Also, it doesn’t sound like the guitars are lead, a main voice, more like a background sound.
I think you should get a main voice in there (like Get Hammered’s Metal Guitar).
Oh, in that case i misunderstood you completely. My apologies:P
I’ve been trying to but its like the guitar completely overshadows everything else unless it has a verry distinct sound. Perhaps i should turn down the volume on it a bit and experiment a little… Hmmm…
On a side note though, in dark drum and bass you often focus on the beat, the energy, the effects and the bass instead of the actual melody. so even though i probably will try to add a more destinct melody, it wont be as dominating as it was in “Get Hammered”
Because I’m too lazy to finish the main song I’m working on, I made this in the meantime (Warning: Copious amounts of repetition ahead):
Before the Critique-this-motherfucker people start getting in, I’ll say that the song was awesome. +4
Haha great.
So i decided to make a different type of song compared to what i usually make…and its obviously nowhere near finished (i expect it to be ALOT longer)
And also…i don’t usually post my songs in this thread…but…i guess one wouldn’t hurt…
Abandoned
Thoughts?
Electric Guitar might sound better as a vox
Drumming was very fitting and nice, and also modest compared to your normal style, which I liked.
Strat riff was fine throughout.
May need to add a bassline?
Good start, I liked it. If you were wondering about our collab, I just got some inspiration.
Dammit…both you and DC have ruined the secrets of our collabs…XD
and thanks, but i think the electric guitar seems to have a certain effect, ill probably add voxes later.
Also…the strat kinda acts the bassline…but if you think i need an actual bassline then ill see what i can do
EDIT: So i just tried switching the electric guitars with the voxes…trust me…it doesn’t work too well XD
EDIT2: There is nothing that is size 1 below this point…
http://notessimo.net/?id=58713
If you want a suggestion for a bass line, I wrote something for sheets 4 and 5 (I hope you don’t consider this rude):
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The bass is probably a little louder than it should be.
If you don’t like it, ignore it.
No, thats more than fine, thank you for the suggestion
its pretty good but i think i’m looking for a more constant bass otherwise it seems to lack depth. Thank-you for the suggestion though
I decided to experiment and make a heavier style song. No name for it yet.
I proceeded to the second chorus, solo in progress. I came up with a name for it. I was going to name it The takeover of notessimo by ponies, but I decided against it.