Unfinished Songs / Demos

That is so true.

I likes sheets 5-7, and the bass at 0.

I started a more techno kind of song that uses all kinds of synths and drums and everything. Oh yeah, I’ve only done about 5 sheets so far.
It’s not much, but here.

[b]Long time no see!
I’m glad to see that the share bug has scurried away. That means…
I’ve come back with four demo tracks! They may not be epic (or good for that matter), but it was what I could pull off in my spare time.
After all, they’re mostly experimental tracks. d:

Demo One
Demo Two
Demo Three
Demo Four

Enjoy! c:[/b]

Well here is what I thought about those.

Demo one-It was my favorite one because it was the longest, but the red guitar (too lazy to type out damant spectrum harm #1, even though I just did) wasn’t out of tune, it was just where the acoustic guitar was right on top of the red guitar, like when the red guitar was on D and the acoustic was on E, and when the red guitar went to E and the acoustic was on F, which didn’t really sound right. Other than that, I like this one. The changing bass drum thing at the beginning was interesting.

Demo two-Sounds pretty good, but I don’t think the hi-hat being down there mixes well.

Demo three-It sounds good, but it really doesn’t feel good. Know what I’m saying?

Demo four-It’s good, but I didn’t really like the guitar jumping up an octave in sheet 2.

That’s great. I like the intense drums at the end.

I felt the damants and the acoustic conflicted slightly. I liked the bit at sheet 10.

Kind of mechanical-y.

Well it seems a little early, but I hope you’ll come up with interesting melodies.

It seems a bit like too much metal guitar, I don’t want a whole song of that.

Also you still have to finish heresy. I haven’t forgotten that.

Did you REALLY Make me fell bad… this is amazing, I’ll never make some like this


When I’ll Finish all of my Unfinished Covers? T_T

And I still have Songs that i haven’t put on my Thread

Oh god…this was kinda a bad add-on for Demo 2…but i regret nothing!! XD (lol not really…i regret alot)

I didn’t really like the guitar intervals.

Demo One:
Get Rid of Sheet 0.
No Bass line?
At the start, Acoustics and Damants were mainly conflicting at D-E combinations, I believe.
(Why does spell-check say “combinations” isn’t a real word?)
Good, but got boring fairly fast.

Demo Two: (Favorite)
Enjoyed the style.
Metal Guitar was too low at the end. Tone quality.
Otherwise, this is good.

Demo Three:
If it stayed 3/4 throughout, then I’d like it.
The Snare really didn’t fit well near the end of each phrase.
If this was a full 3/4 song, it’d be good!

Demo Four:
Good at first, E flat is wrong; D is wrong. C has a bad tone but it fits good enough.
A simple drum beat would work for it.
(Did you just throw this in at the last minute?)

QVX + Demo two:
No, absolutely NO.
You changed the style! It sounded at first like a small, light song, even with the metal guitar.
The metal guitar up higher should’ve been more quiet!
(Why is “should’ve” a wrong word on spell check?)

Like i said…it was terrible…i was trying to turn it into something else…that didn’t work…then it got changed alot and failed epicly…
So anyway…i was distracted by another song from a game…don’t ask :confused:

http://notessimo.net/?id=59052

This is “Boogie Wonderland” by Earth, Wind & Fire.

I didn’t know if we had a disco thread, but I didn’t make one, because this is unfinished. If we don’t have one, I’ll make one when this is done.

Not a bad start, can’t wait for the finished version.

Also, it’s a tad unnecessary to make a brand new thread for one song… just like user threads, there should be a bit to contribute before making one, wouldn’t you agree? (Besides, I don’t know if disco will be a popular enough genre here yet.)

After learning about the two-site thing with Notessimo, I went back and looked up some of my old (most are over a year old now) songs. This seemed like a good thread to put them in (except I feel more and more like I shouldn’t just dump all my unfinished stuff in here).

Tune 1
This was a failed attempt to create something that sounded like the Modern Warfare 2 theme.

Tune 2
I think this song sounds ever so vaguely like the Moonlight Sonata. It has a IVmaj7 chord, which I like the sound of, but rarely use.

Tune 3
This was going to be a version of a song that I wrote called ‘You Know That I’m Here’, but ever since I heard ‘Mighty to Save’ , I’ve pretty much given up on it.

Tune 4
The solo for this was bad. Really, really, bad. I rewrote it slightly before posting it. Still sounds pretty bad.

Tune 5
This song is the one that I think has the most potential. I might go back to it later, but I have other songs I should be working on right now.

Ya… thhis is a great song that it worth be listen
(i was clear?? :S)

Fran, how could you. :frowning:

Your avatar fit with the sentence


Kave… in 1, 2, 3, 4 I REALLY Like what do you do with the chords progression
In 5 It isn’t a Tune… it’s a Unfinished SONG!

@Kaveman, Nice songs, you’re really good.

Also just to say the recoil project thingy is still getting stuck in my head.

Not sure if I’ve ever applied the word “beautiful” to a Notessimo song, by my gosh does this song fit that word perfectly.