Unfinished Songs / Demos

Notessimo Maestro
#1741

THERE’S NO MELODY YET.
Just started it a few days ago. I mainly worked on volume and tempo.

EDIT:
@Kaveman
Tune 1:
Why were the first 2 hits so soft?
Add some hi-hat to sheets 1 and 0!
The rest of it sounds good, and I bet you could make something out of 2 DEFINITELY.

Tune 2:
Didn’t enjoy it that much, but it’s not bad.
Low tubular bells: Ouch. (Mainly the 2nd one!)

Tune 3:
Star called 5 beatiful, but I call this one beatiful.

Tune 4:
The Bass drum killed you.
Make the Electric Guitar lengths 9, that should help.
It’s actually not that bad. (What solo are you talking about?)
I believe you’ve heard the song “Walk This Way” by Aerosmith, haven’t you?

Tune 5:
Something was off in the beginning, presumably the metal guitar.
Lower Female voices didn’t fit well.
Cymbals could be softer or snares should be a bit softer.
Little repetitive, don’t you think?

Overall, a great unfinished song demo thing-a-ma-jigger.
Tune 3, that’s all I’m going to say.

#1742

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#1743

Was that a spam post?

#1744

EDIT… sorry, I was confused XD

I said that I LOVE That song

#1745

What does it mean?

#1746

@TheFinalBoss

Regarding Tune 1: The sheet 4 was intended to be a fade-in (See thread title). Not sure what you mean by the “hi-hats”. The crash at the start of sheet 1?

Regarding Tune 2: The sheet 4 was intended to be a fade-in (See thread title). Not sure what you mean by the “hi-hats”. The crash at the start of sheet 1?

Regarding Tune 4: The “solo” is on sheet 3. As I said, it’s bad.
No, I had never heard “Walk This Way” until after you mentioned it. Why do you ask?

Regarding Tune 5: Yes, it’s repetitive. I was experimenting with repeating the chorus. I also didn’t finish making the chorus less repetitive.

Regarding “Total Eclipse of the Heart”: Very good. sounds close to the original. Not sure if “Male Vox #1” fits Bonnie Tyler’s voice, though.

#1747

How do you not know what walk this way is?

#1748

I didn’t listen to a lot of secular music while I was growing up.

#1749

Cool

I made a techno beat…
I’ll post it later (updated).

#1750

Good start!

What song?

#1751

“Walk this Way” by Aerosmith.
The reason I ask if because you’re beat in Tune 4 (I think it was) had the similar drum beat as “Walk this Way.”

Male Vox is the background voice. The background voice isn’t Bonnie Tyler.

Links to Songs:
Walk This Way (Aerosmith)
Total Eclipse of the Heart (Bonnie Tyler)

Edit:

NO MELODY YET
Up to entrance of snares!
Man, there’s a LOT of occidentals in this song!
I believe this is the first cover to use the trash can?

#1752

I’ve made a little demo of Walk this way

TFB… i don’t like the bass… can you change it?

#1753

D’oh! My bad. Still think it sounds a bit low, though.

And fran5 is right, “Synth Bass #2” is way out of tune (Starburst’s fault, not yours).

#1754

I was gonna make more disco. Lol.

#1755

We have a Dance Thread.

#1756

Yes, we know. (Or at least I do.)

Regarding the Synth Bass #2, I looked at all the other basses, and none could come close to it (Regarding Sound length and tune).
If anybody has any ideas with it, tell or show me.

–If this is 1978, I’d kill myself. (For those who don’t know, 1978 is when disco “died”)

Probably the last demo I’ll put in for this song. It’ll be in my thread.

EDIT:
Fixed a few wrong notes and the bassline.

#1757

Is it Jazz? Is it Music? is it Random? Thats for you to find out…

#1758

Sounds like elevator music to me…

#1759

Nice ix XD

#1760

RANDOM!