Unfinished Songs / Demos

I was going to collab with guitarmania on this, but he hasn’t been on notessimo for a while.
I decided to cancel the collab. Most of this is mine (He changed around the strings a little, and I changed them afterwards.)

[b]Comeback kid?
Victorious. Something.
King. Attempt at lo-fi.
Exudes. Boredom.

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y=mx+b A.K.A. y=algebraic mind control

Heh, that’s funny because I’m taking Algebra 1 Honors this year [2 more weeks of school :3].

As for the song, it could be a good chorus or intro if you create something much more intense that what it is.

yeah, so um… yeah

[quote=“Kamarai”]

[quote=“Octoviator”]

Heh, that’s funny because I’m taking Algebra 1 Honors this year Nice, I’m in trig… and we’re still using it! (From Algebra I to Geometry, then Algebra II and the finally Trig (after a semester of Stats) … and there it is… dang mind control, it’s just like the metal guitar on Notessimo [2 more weeks of school :3].HOLY! We only have 1 week left and we had 2 and 1/2 weeks of snow or so… what the hell did you guys do?

Heh I’m on my summer holidays now.

I Ax+By+C I=tanθ


√A²+B²

OH THE MATHEMATICAL EQUATIONS sdkljsldj

Uh, on topic: Not bad. It’s quite catchy.

I’m trying to make a cover for “Word of Mouth” by John Reuben. Anyone wanna help me? Here is what I have so far: http://notessimo.net/?id=61349

Here is the original that I’m going by: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EAjyce9thMk

Any help?

@Jeslaw:
I don’t make songs like that. It sounds too much like rap. (I despise rap.)

I do not have any clue why I made this crap of a song.

It’s really random with the bass.

Yes very random. Just think though. John Rueben is considered Hip-hop. Aslong as you find the right guys rapish hip-hop is awesome. John Rueben and toby mac are examples.

@Kamarai… your song sounds like Megadeth (for me :stuck_out_tongue: )

Why do you hate Maths?

I don’t like rap. If anything, I would listen to Run DMC, but not often. They have rap, but they also put a lot of music into their rap, which makes it much better than today’s rap, which has no true value of music.

[b]Sex, drugs, and violence is what modern rap is all about.
Back in the day when rap didn’t just scratch the surface; that’s where it’s at.

And now, we zoom back into my petty composing aspirations. c;

I need to converse with you guys more often.[/b]

That’s what I meant when I said: “As long as you find the right guys…” There are many of them if you can find them. I’m not sure if we have the same beliefs, (I am a Christian) but that’s why I listen to Christian rap. I also like Christian rock like Brian Head Welch, Skillet, The Letter Black, etc. I’m also for the contemporary pop like Building 429, House of Heroes, 10th Avenue North, Sidewalk Prophets, etc. Like what one of John Rueben’s song says:
“Ya’ll got to be kidding
man, some of ya’ll treat art like it was some sort of religion
following the rules one two and on through
to the point you don’t create art
art created you
ya’ll got to be kidding
some of ya’ll treat hip hop
like it was some sort of religion
following the rules
one two and on through
to the point you don’t create hip hop
hip hop created you”

You’re like Octo, too many unfinished songs.
Great one though.

Meh, in my opinion if you have to look for the “right” guys a genre isn’t worth it.

I always did dislike this thread.

[b]It’s not that I don’t try to finish my songs. It’s that I often wait too long, to a point where the original idea expressed by the said piece is long gone; or I’m simply stuck on where to go with it.

Regardless, a slow-paced experimental utilizing that lonely drum loop. :b
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That still doesn’t help me finish my cover… :confused: